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假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文,请修改你同桌写的以下作文...[高二][英语]

2021-10-25   答题:高二英语(汪老师)

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文,请修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am the shared bike. I’d like to be on the street to serve for people. They can ride me just via a mobile app. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us with paying their bills on the app but treated us badly. They broke my saddle and even threw my friends everywhere. We felt angry for which those bad guys had done. Thanks to some kindly people, we received careful “treatment”. Now, you help as well as the whole society’s attention is what we need most. We are designed to help people who are stuck the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the basic rules.

【答案】第一句:the 改为a

第二句:去掉for

第四句:happen 改为happened

第五句:with改为without;but改为and

第七句:which改为what

第八句:kindly改为kind

第九句:you 改为your

第十句:stuck后加inby

第十一句:toy改为toys

【解析】本文是共享单车的自述,解释了共享单车受到的不公平待遇,希望人们善待共享单车。

1.第一句:the 改为a.考查冠词。bike是可数名词单数,此处表示一辆共享单车,故the 改为a.

2.第二句:去掉for.考查动词。句中动词serve是及物动词,后面直接加宾语,不用加介词。故去掉for.

3.第四句:happen 改为happened.考查动词时态。根据时间状语a few days ago可知用一般过去时,故happen 改为happened.

4.第五句:with改为without.考查介词。此处指有的人不在应用上付款偷走了一些单车,表示没有付款,故with改为without.

5. 第五句:but改为and.考查连词。此处指有些人不付款偷走单车,还对我们不好。前后句是并列关系,不是转折。故but改为and.

6.第七句:which改为what.考查宾语从句。此处指对那些坏家伙所做的事感到生气,表示做的事用what引导宾语从句,故which改为what.

7.第八句:kindly改为kind.考查形容词。此处修饰名词people用形容词,故kindly改为kind.

8.第九句:you 改为your.考查物主代词。此处修饰名词help用形容词性物主代词,指你的帮助,故you 改为your.

9.第十句:stuck后加inby.考查介词。此处指被交通堵住,或是在交通阻塞中堵住,故stuck后加inby.

10.第十一句:toy改为toys.考查名词。和句中主语和动词We are一致,名词也用复数。故toy改为toys.

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